No I love this fic. :D Like even as I was scrolling down to answer - swagger! keeping time! I forgot to tell you that I aodre that you love these two because I love these two and as I keep hearing, this is not a very popular opinion. Whatevs, I'll just continue living in my deluded redverse bubble.
Hm, I do agree about everything bubbling up to him saying I love you. So then it does make sense that he would show up loud and everywhere and poor Olivia dear ... haha continue putting lots of thoughts into your fic~ I think it's good, though, that it ends up being about both of them, even if it's Lincoln at first and then Olivia. Lots of layers in a simple format like this, ten things.
Well I mean, you could have like two lines as 9a when Lincoln finds out she's engaged and he's like given up the thought of idk, holding her as his own but now that he has it, it's slipping away from him too. Even though he's dead. 9a is a terrible place to put it as the end is delicate (and well done, also) but just a thought.
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Hm, I do agree about everything bubbling up to him saying I love you. So then it does make sense that he would show up loud and everywhere and poor Olivia dear ... haha continue putting lots of thoughts into your fic~ I think it's good, though, that it ends up being about both of them, even if it's Lincoln at first and then Olivia. Lots of layers in a simple format like this, ten things.
Well I mean, you could have like two lines as 9a when Lincoln finds out she's engaged and he's like given up the thought of idk, holding her as his own but now that he has it, it's slipping away from him too. Even though he's dead. 9a is a terrible place to put it as the end is delicate (and well done, also) but just a thought.