This is amazing. Heartbreaking and amazing and adfhohow your writing makes me feel things.

I enjoyed her friendship with Charlie. I know that's not what this fic is about, but I like the way you put bits of it in anyway. Especially that Charlie's on a date with Mona and that Charlie thinks that Liv and Lincoln going on a date is hysterical.

I love the scene in the hospital, and I love when she calls him to help with the baby. This is just so great I think it's my favorite out of all the things I've read that you've written so far.

Plus what a KILLER line to end with!