Ann sits back in the chair again. “You have something that most people don’t get. You get a choice. Are you going to let that walk away? Can you live with that?”
AND
He just wants to kiss her. It seems so inane, so impossibly juvenile, but god all he wants is kiss her. That simple act could keep him, he thinks, for years.
WHAT. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME?
FLAWLESS.
Seriously though, best Park and Rec fic I've ever read. Everyone is flawlessly written, so in character. Like, I see this actually being an episode. And you know how I feel about your writing... so pitch-perfect. Poetic without being purple-y. So.
Basically, you are perfect. Ben and Leslie are perfect. All is perfect in this little moment.
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Date: 2011-03-26 12:41 am (UTC)AND
He just wants to kiss her. It seems so inane, so impossibly juvenile, but god all he wants is kiss her. That simple act could keep him, he thinks, for years.
WHAT. WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME?
FLAWLESS.
Seriously though, best Park and Rec fic I've ever read. Everyone is flawlessly written, so in character. Like, I see this actually being an episode. And you know how I feel about your writing... so pitch-perfect. Poetic without being purple-y. So.
Basically, you are perfect. Ben and Leslie are perfect. All is perfect in this little moment.