http://jada-jasmine.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] jada-jasmine.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] anythingbutgrey 2010-12-08 09:39 pm (UTC)

Re: harry/hermione -- tell you that the metaphor is better than yours (pg)

oh oh oh you just broke my heart.

Seven years of her ideas shaping his future and her hand learning its way comfortably into his and the war to end all wars; he’ll never known another girl – woman – the way he knows her.

^ THIS. For me, those are all the reasons that h/hr could've worked out perfectly and the rest of the fic is absolutely heartbreaking. truly fantastic job.

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