This is so lovely. And I'm obsessed with the title that you have chosen.
Somewhere between the end of the tournament and the beginnings of an idea for an army of children she faced the fact that maybe they were never meant to be children. That was meant for generations after.
Sigh. Perfect.
The fighting done and battles chronicled in headstones and scars, the measure of loss unquantifiable in words or statistics.
I LOVE this sentence.
and he’s there listening to her like she’s the only thing in a roomful of robed officials worth paying attention to
The mental image of this in my head is so friggin beautiful and perfect. <3
He’s better now with words but sometimes, like now, when he passes her one of Molly’s freshly rinsed plates, he tells her things that make her think he’s trying to tell her something else.
It hits her hard, deep in her gut and twists. They were never meant to be children.
Okay, so I've basically quoted the whole damn thing, but that's just because I love it so and OH MY HEART. Lovely, lovely work.
Re: harry/hermione - we're sorry for the iron shoes we nailed to you
Somewhere between the end of the tournament and the beginnings of an idea for an army of children she faced the fact that maybe they were never meant to be children. That was meant for generations after.
Sigh. Perfect.
The fighting done and battles chronicled in headstones and scars, the measure of loss unquantifiable in words or statistics.
I LOVE this sentence.
and he’s there listening to her like she’s the only thing in a roomful of robed officials worth paying attention to
The mental image of this in my head is so friggin beautiful and perfect. <3
He’s better now with words but sometimes, like now, when he passes her one of Molly’s freshly rinsed plates, he tells her things that make her think he’s trying to tell her something else.
It hits her hard, deep in her gut and twists. They were never meant to be children.
Okay, so I've basically quoted the whole damn thing, but that's just because I love it so and OH MY HEART. Lovely, lovely work.