She was too immobile to cry before, but now the tears come out like thunderstorms and she can’t breathe, losing him now just a memory, a false vision that she already feels turning to a nightmare.
This line made me tear up so I couldn't even read the next paragraph for a few seconds. Wow. I didn't expect that and I am an H/Hr shipper. Great writing will do it every time. :-)

Thanks for sharing this!