So I was reading this again. For possible ideas to finish this freaking fic. AND I TOTALLY LIKE IT EVEN MORE THE SECOND TIME! Y/Y!
She chooses to blame Aaron for that, because it’s easier than saying the nightmares won’t stop. I love that she uses Aaron as a protective barrier. Both with planes and Sawyer and Jack. He's her new safety net and it just fits so perfectly.
And the ending. Le sigh. The twisting you did with the dialogue and their moment is all heartbreaking and angst-y. Even MORESO.
And the summarizing parts — like with Sun — absolutely kill me. Because it's like, BUT SUN and the way you do it is all subtle so that you almost don't catch it but THEN YOU DO AND YOU ARE DEVASTATED.
… I think I am going to go be masochistic and read Culpa.
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So I was reading this again. For possible ideas to finish this freaking fic. AND I TOTALLY LIKE IT EVEN MORE THE SECOND TIME! Y/Y!
She chooses to blame Aaron for that, because it’s easier than saying the nightmares won’t stop.
I love that she uses Aaron as a protective barrier. Both with planes and Sawyer and Jack. He's her new safety net and it just fits so perfectly.
And the ending. Le sigh. The twisting you did with the dialogue and their moment is all heartbreaking and angst-y. Even MORESO.
And the summarizing parts — like with Sun — absolutely kill me. Because it's like, BUT SUN and the way you do it is all subtle so that you almost don't catch it but THEN YOU DO AND YOU ARE DEVASTATED.
… I think I am going to go be masochistic and read Culpa.