ext_19968 ([identity profile] deadduck008.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] anythingbutgrey 2007-11-26 01:31 pm (UTC)

SHE'S JUST THE GIRL FOR ME AND I WANT ALL THE WORLD TO SEE WE'VE MET
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

I really just want to sing that now.

They revel in clichés of young love and think themselves unique. But that’s always how it feels, though, isn’t it.
I love this play on cliches and uniqueness. And the parentheses afterward. True love - always the same story just in different settings and with more angst than the world can handle!

She hears the crack in his voice on the singular note, wants to rush forward like a gust of wind in reverse and pull him home, breathless kisses and never leave me.
When I read this I was like, HECK YES. Because again, very you and it reminds me of 'if I could reverse it I don't think it would be worth it' - one of your j/b fics?

She keeps her window shut at night now, outlaws about.
Killer.

FALLING, YES I AM FALLING, AND SHE KEEPS CALLING, ME BACK AGAIN.

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