You should be proud of yourself hun. I kinda disagree, with Robin not really loving her before he left, although you do have me re-thinking my position on that. You capture the way he missed her in a special way, I can see it like that too. The last line is just bang on target. Thats one of the nest one-liners ever! it should be in an icon, or on a wallpaper or something. Keep writing! you've got something great going on!
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Date: 2007-11-18 03:00 pm (UTC)